A sampler dish: examples of words in stacks of paragraphs, including my recent essay at Harper’s.
In this mock-up, I have added a new title, new subheads, and heavily edited copy. The original article is available here. This edit maintains the length of the original piece, but trims the words-per-sentence count by nearly 10 percent. I believe my edit improves the clarity and overall cadence of the piece, too.
I’ve worked on a range of projects for the Cleveland Water Alliance. Here, I include prose from the Erie Hack website that indicates my contribution to the branding of the blue economy. Page two, which is an excerpt from a grant request that netted $250,000, provides a taste of my capacities for brevity and clarity.… Read More
TOTh Mktg. is a top-notch marketing agency on the westside of Cleveland. Jason Toth brought me onboard for a close review of the website’s text and a UI/UX analysis. This project kicked off with the discovery phase: Jason Toth and I spoke for a couple of hours about the principles that inform Toth Mktg. and… Read More
For the latest issue, I wrote original copy for each section of the magazine, and I edited copy submitted by shop owners, nonprofit leaders, and city officials. Below, I’ve included the opening essay and the introductory note for the food section.
These opinion pieces were commissioned by clients, but neither was accepted for publication–which allows me to include them here. I wrote “Defend the Land and Water” in spring 2018, when the Trump administration considered slashing the funding for the Great Lakes Restoration Initiative by 90%. I wrote “A Reaganesque Opportunity for Trump” in spring 2018,… Read More
Jennifer hired me ahead of an upcoming launch, and here’s some of the work I did for her website. Jennifer and I had a great time working together. First we chatted over lunch. Then, after she submitted her discovery survey, we talked via zoom.us about her responses and my angle to capture her voice. Jennifer’s a… Read More
Copyediting and line editing
Two examples here. Before on the left. After on the right.
My recent essay in Harper’s
“Dignified and Old: Notes on aging, memory, and fandom” conveys my love for music, my ability to construct arguments and, with any luck, my sense of humor.