Turner’s take on Colin Huang, the low-key Chinese billionaire behind Pinduoduo / the Cadence edit bolsters the narrative thread and the readability. Enjoy!
Countdown, from the Bulwark — the Cadence edit. Not much work to do here beyond a bit of polish and some clarity through specificity / @sykescharlie @bulwarkonline
JED Foundation / With 20 years in the academy, I learned a few things about the well-being of college students. It’s complicated — and a growing market. The challenge: tighten the copy, and add clarity, concision and cadence / @ jcros
California Dreamin’ — is it now a recurring nightmare? I grew up a flatlander, and my heart goes out to my CA brethren. The challenge: tighten the copy, and add clarity, concision and cadence / @ jcros